Practice Lead Writing Journalism 1

1.)  Starting an open campus lunch policy on April 3rd of RHHS. All the students except freshmen will have the option. Of the “Phenomental test scores”, the policy was granted and giving the students a 45 minute lunch,the lunch periods will be extended by 10 minutes.

 

2.) Annoucing that Rock Hill will be recieving the next Super Wal-Mart in May of 2006,because of the community’s huge growth.

 

3.) Of his genius status,Napeleon Dynamite has been told he might be moved up to RH High School early.

 

4.) A survey was released yesterday by the child Abused Prevention Center in Baltimore to show the amounts and percentages of children that were killed.

  

5.) Awakened by smoke and flames.Kathy Mahoney found her home in the 2300 block of Main Street online due to a lighted cigarette in the sofa around 3am.

   

 

One thought on “Practice Lead Writing Journalism 1

  1. You have to fix the mechanics of your leads, it takes away from the meaning. Use a comma after your introductory phrase instead of a period.

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